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(Message started by: tkc1989 on Oct 14^th, 2008, 4:47pm)

Title: I wrote a song and made a recording!
Post by tkc1989 on Oct 14^th, 2008, 4:47pm

My most recent song...kinda folky, I made a really crappy recording of it but gives you an idea of what it's ''meant'' to sound like...if anyone's interested...

http://www.yousendit.com/download/Y2orQ3Q4cklGR0ZFQlE9PQ

'Hayley'

I took a walk up to the ocean
And all I got was my feet wet
I went along with a stupid notion
That I could get back to when we first met

Hayley, the sun ain�t been shining
Lately, the Lord knows I�m trying
Maybe, I�m never gonna get into you

The rain it fell in late October
I couldn�t feel a thing but the cold
I couldn�t believe that it was over
And I couldn�t watch the love we had unfold

Hayley, the sun ain�t been shining
Lately, the Lord knows I�m trying
Maybe, I�m never gonna get into you

Oh, Hayley
Do you remember me?
We wrote our names in the sand
Amidst the noise of the bellowing sea

Hayley, the sun ain�t been shining
Lately, the Lord knows I�m trying
Maybe, I�m never gonna get into you

I took a walk up to the ocean
Back to where on you my eyes first lay
I ran through the wind and stormy weather
To find that the sea had washed us away

Title: Re: I wrote a song and made a recording!
Post by Shannon on Oct 24^th, 2008, 8:37am

I LOVE the lyrics. The recording is actually quite good. I think it sounds great. You have a really nice voice. I'd definitely listen to this if it were on the radio.

Sorry it took so long to respond to this thread. I tend to forget about our other forums.

Thanks for sharing.