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(Message started by: tkc1989 on Jul 28^th, 2006, 7:59am)

Title: Another Song...
Post by tkc1989 on Jul 28^th, 2006, 7:59am

Ok, I know this one is really corny and chessy but it's everything I needed to say...it's basically just to get things off my chest. Feel free to criticise!

'Love Song'

I love what we�ve become
I�m comfortable in this shell
But how can words express
How could they tell?
That I need you more than that
I need you more than I can say

This a love song
That I wrote for us
I know it�s not long
And I know it�s not much
But I just want to say
That you�re beautiful today
And everyday

And you fill my world with something
That makes me feel inside
You hit me like a whirlwind
And it makes me feel alive
But I need you more than that
I need you more than I can say

This a love song
That I wrote for us
I know it�s not long
And I know it�s not much
But I just want to say
That you�re beautiful today
And everyday

and if anyone's interested on what it sounds like...I did the crappiest recording of all time using the mic on my webcam, its just the chorus but you get the idea....

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=0D265D3E1FE8E3F0

Title: Re: Another Song...
Post by Hysteria on Jul 31^st, 2006, 2:53pm

Wow, you're a good singer! Really like that, some nice lyrics really really good! :D

Title: Re: Another Song...
Post by tkc1989 on Aug 2^nd, 2006, 10:57am

Hey Thanks :D Really appreciate it, although its not the best recording :-/